OMFG...I LOVE THIS STORY! You definatly have a talent for writing. It's great. I just love Elena's fiery personality. Cant's wait for the next chapter. Keep up the awesome/great/phenominal/etc. writing.

**Nicole**

poke. update. poke. update. poke. update...

:) CD

This is such a great story. I bet with a bit of refining you could get this published. Everyone loves the rare female hero.

poke. update, poke. update. poke. update...

:) CD

Heh... I love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter. IT HAD BETTER COME SOON!PLEASE!

This story is fabulous. There's so much tension throughout it. That woman who's out to get Elena is creepy... keep writing.

same boy-friend twice removed?

Wow. This story is brilliant. The charcters are interesting and likeable, and the plot is enthralling. I can only offer compliments. Will we ever see Thorne again? I like him. I can't wait for the next chapter!

This is an absolutely amazing piece. I think it's one of your best stories. The plot is thrilling and twisted. I can't stop reading it. This is awesome.

There are some parts that are too...general and vague. Although it's good that you are foreshadowing, maybe give a little bit more info. For example: there is one part in the beginning chapters that said Elena had given up some things many years ago. What had she given up? Is this sentence important?

All I can say is that this is really publishing material. Please update soon. God this is so awesome.

I was reading and not reviewing...adn now I'm revwieing and reading, I feel so proud.

Please continue.

Over and out.

I know what it feels like to be discriminated like that! You've done a good job thus far and you should keep up the good work be careful with your plot dont let it stretch too much.

Hey! I haven't reveiwed for awhile, but I like this chapter a lot! The whole turning Elena into guy is really cool! Great job!

Ok sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. Whenever I get a chance to read this story I mainly focus on reading but from now on I'll review for every chapter starting with this one (even though I read this chapter like a month ago), but anyway, I love the story so far.

OMG! I love this story. I can't wait to see what happens next.

lovely chapterswell done