Once more, this is strangely funny. :) to use a cliche, two thumbs up!

OH, OLYMPIA, YOU'RE FUNNY! Heh, heh, heh! ^_^ That was hilarious, very well written! I think I'll put it on my favorites! ^_~

this is really nice...the oh how i miss the seven something train line gives a classical feeling to the poem...i also liked the last line...good job...oh and pls...if you have the time...pls do reivew some of my poems...thanks...serene-rhapsody

Aw... don't cry, you've just write a cool poem.

Olympia I love you and I love the seven o eight train even more. I miss it so much. The seven o five is a ** pig who likes to eat doughnuts. I think that Silver Link Metro. I have contemplated that the Silver Link Metro trains are audacious imbeciles and I think that they should be made redundant because they are very silly and the seven o eight train service has been permanently suspended for ever and that is very upsetting for me we should make a funeral for the seven o eight. I think that you should write a poem about the sixteen sixteen train which is now the ** sixteen seventeen train, that just sounds really extremely stupid I think (OF FOR FUYCKS SAKC I CANNOT TYPE) olympia stop making strange noises. oH, I LOVE you seven o eight train and I will miss you with great honour.

Good poem, by the way.,