 Skeptic-Critic 2007-03-29 . chapter 2Are you ever going to return to us? Is this the end of Trust Me? Please tell me you haven't abandoned this story...Because we haven't abandoned you...We're still here...And we'll still be here when you get around to updating again... |
 Skeptic_Critic 2006-10-01 . chapter 1 Hey there! Remember me? It's been awhile so I'm not sure you do...Anyway, just wanted to let you know that (last) Sunday marks the official one year point since your last updated...Wanted to make sure you knew that there are people still wiating for an update and that we haven't abandoned this story...It's too good to let go... |
 pixaroo 2006-06-16 . chapter 14WHEN E U GOING TO UPDATE?!?!?! PLZ UPDATE SOON...I'M DYING TO KNO WATZ GONNA HAPPEN NEXT...PLZ HURRY UP!! |
 lonelywriter09 2006-03-16 . chapter 12Are you ever going to update? I love this story and I wish you would continue. Even if you're not, will you please post saying so? I think you should continue though. |
 StrawberryStarburst 2006-02-06 . chapter 14It's new year, time for an UPDATE. Just Kidding. No seriously, get a move on! Sorry. I'm just really getting into the story and then you leave me in the dark. Sorry again. just..don't keep me waiting too long. :) |
 Calligra Lurea dre' Alleck 2006-01-23 . chapter 14Please, please, please update this story! I love it and I really want to read more of it, in fast I want to die from sheer boredom. Please? |
 Skeptic-Critic 2006-01-03 . chapter 1Hey there...Just wanted to start off the new year by letting you know that I haven't forgotten about you and that I'm still waiting for that update. I will not abandon this story 'til you say you're through (though I hope that won’t be ‘til you’re finished) . Hope you get the inspiration to update soon.
'Til then... |
 photogirl16 2005-12-09 . chapter 14hun, you need to update soon. I read this chapter a long time ago and never reviewed thinking that you were going to update soon cause you were determind to finish this story. Well, anyways, it was a good chapter. Update soon! |
 Wannabe-Novelist 2005-10-29 . chapter 1Okay, I read this all in one sitting-- and while I tend to do this, I don't do with anything I don't like. And I really do like this. The sinister, convoluted plot that they're trying to figure out-- that's good. Especially since there's that lack of trust. The characters, all with their own quirks, they're good, too. Alyx's paranoia, Catherine unable to talk to anyone but the cat but desperately wanting to. Kayla's incompetence at the finer points of being an assassin-- such as having a story prepared beforehand.
However, Kayla's ingratiation with Castel seems...I don't know. Rushed. She comes to kill him and he gives her a job? It's baffling, but I could accept it if a decent explanation was put forth. The problem was, there wasn't one. If it were me, I would just take out the bit about trying to kill him. Well, she can go there to try or to scout it out, but don't let him know. Otherwise, it throws things. After she saves his life, then it works, but before...? And wouldn't he be suspicious of someone who had tried to kill him saving his life? I know he's kindly, but that's pushing it.
I believe that's the only problem I had with the story, and with a little maneuvering and some creativeness, it could be easily remedied. Aside from some mistakes in the text and other mechanical whatnot...Otherwise, good job. |
 lonelywriter09 2005-09-26 . chapter 14Ok I almost never review on most stories I read. I tend to make exceptions for this story just because it's great... and I want to review so that maybe it will encourage you to update faster. Please. Soon. I want to know what happens next! |
 Klianie Janiko 2005-09-24 . chapter 14Is Catherine under a spell? She acknowledges it. Or did you asked a psychologist about this? hehe. Thank you, I'm glad you found it funny, but the big exams are coming up, I'll write after the exam. What's Kayla's dream of? when are the secrets gonna be revealled? Argh! You got me suspended in mid air girl! |
 Vivian LeFaye 2005-09-24 . chapter 14This is awesome! :)! You have to finish! And I am aware of my odd overuse oa exclamation points! |
 Skeptic_Critic 2005-09-24 . chapter 14 i'm quite good at guessing these things yes. unfortunatly i have no idea why jay is courting catherine other than to beat out calvin and his country...oh...omg, i think i get it. he's doing it for his country so they can have the aliance instead of calvin's country. oh...is that it? did i get it right? anyway, i shall not give up on my castel theory because if he doesn't come back to life alyx'll never forgive her...or she could tell him the whole story about that being her father too...hm...that could work as well...hm...anyway i think i'll still hold hope that alyx and kayla find out they're not really related so that they can get together. i've got my fingers crossed. oh and by the way, was this your shorter update time? goodness, you authors are going to kill me one these days i swear... |
 Vivian LeFaye 2005-09-24 . chapter 8This is one crazy story! At this rate Alyx will wind up killing Kayla. |
 Keir16 2005-09-24 . chapter 1hey, great story. i hope kayla and jay get together |