This is probably one of the most fantastic poems I've read on fictionpress...well, a quote came to mind when reading this, so I guess I may as well put it down; "Nothing in life is to be feared. It is only to be understood."I forgot the person whom said it...

i really liked it. i really dislike the word "thee" and it's counterparts...i don't really know why, maybe it just seems to suck the emotion out. but other than that, great stuff. thanks for the review!~katie

yay. succumb is one of my favorite words, if only because it reminds me of the word succubus, which is also awesome...

fr some reason this reminds me of blake.

and yes, i am fifteen.

and if you like, dedicate a piece to me.

Nice irony. Beautifully done.