So, so good. I love all of the emotions.

i am a big fan of creepy love poems...most of mine end up creepy.

I love this poem, you caught the feelings exactly. I feel like this also.

Keep it up.

another great poem, well done

I know just how this feels, i can relate to it so much, The false pretenses just so another won't worry...Love your work. Keep writing. Miss-fev

Hey very cool, alex. Loved it ,it really worked well. Yeah well 13 days left eh? Maybe your spirits will lift then. Great stuff, i really liked it, love you Keith Andrew

ouch.. the pain is coming back from old scars... I still clearly remember how this feels. nice poem btw. I couldn't of expressed this better myself!

it alot!i like the bold writing, good poem is so true, and well emotional.i really liked it!