I could relate to that as I'm feeling it right now. But I liked your formatting of it and you wrote it well.

I love this. The shortness of your lines add something to your uncertainty, I like the flow of this poem.

Keep it up.

I love this, I can relate so well. I am drawn to it. It goes the the favs!

in the last stanza are you saying that youre lacking love too? i can understand that, cause when someone lies to you, you begin to not like them, especially if you hold honesty and trust very highly as one of your morals like me. Ive never actually lost love because of lies though..im too soft like that, but i really like this cause its like how i would want myself to react to someone betraying my trust-asha

i love that analogy!! "Talking to someone,Is like,Stepping on ice.

Unsure whether,It will break,And take me down to the depths."great poem, i really liked it!

beautiful!! Bravo!

loved it

I know exactly what you mean! Isn't it awful when one total idiot screws up all your chances of ever being able to trust somebody again??

I liked the end. Lack of trust. A very descriptive way to say you can't be anymore. I really liked the whole peice, very nice.

Oh this is so sad, did he like cheat on your or something? That's what it sounds like

a poem we all can relate to. i like how you compared trust to ice. Very nice. Keep writing.

~MT

I like the way the verses are laid out and divided with your use of commas. And the anger you've portrayed is very, very well put...

But the ending's kind of weird.

All in all, great poem. ^_^

Cool, I like this it's relatable.

OH...Man! I liked this one so much. I can relate, its just so true. The end truely got me. -adds to favorites-

~Lyndz~

Aw. It was both cute yet I could feel the hatred inside. Not an easy feet in my humble opinion. :P Good job !! ^-^

~ Noelle ~>.>;;