hey this story is so good i cant beleive that her father would do that its so gross

ok, so i just read your second author's note and perhaps you didn't know about reviewing, but the bad reviews are just as useful as the good reviews. constructive criticism. every author can use it. you seem to be completely ignoring this fact though. and the tone of that author's note is atrocious. saying that you "don't want crap" on your review list. well, tough. if this is part of your life that you are writing about then it doesn't hurt to actually look up the details and background of things.
so construct on these bad and crap reviews that you have been getting, quit complaining and ask what needs improving.

this story moves too fast with too little detail. you get a little too wrapped up with your writing and don't build on the scene backgrounds well enough. for example: someone doesn't just get immediately sentenced to life in prison without a trial. that's just not the way things work.

i really am sorry and yeah ** sorry lol

great story! when are you gunna update?

Don't write about rape if you know nothing of rape.

okay... i read it... update, please! please please please please please! you said you would!

Aww... you always find the best places to end your stories.

Don't to be continue me, lol! :P what happens, angel?

:P i already know who it is. daddy's dead, and there's only one other guy in your story... unless it's jason. :P love you doll

I love your story, but i love you more. What have you been up to, girl? you quit emailing me! (pouts

OH MUH ** GOD! that made me cry, you little brat. Please continue this. you ended it! :( please update, angel please!

Jake? Hmm... that name sounds familiar. roflmao

Why do you always do that? It's so sad!

More? Why are you asking, DARNIT! please!