|Reviews for Deity :Title Subejct to Change:|
| Moroni's Daughter 1/21/05 . chapter 1
I like this. I loved the description and the plot has great potential. However, you use a bit too much passive voice. Pathetic? No. I wouldn't call this pathetic at all.
| Kirona of the skies 12/18/04 . chapter 1
A new story! W00t-ness. _
| Fohruun of the Phoenix Class 12/14/04 . chapter 1
Wow. That's really cool. I like the name. This is gonna be cool. n_n
| Libby Lou 12/14/04 . chapter 1
Yesh, I like it. I'd have to see how the story unfolds to see if I like the name. But it sounds cool so far. Yay!
| Katie-chan 12/14/04 . chapter 1
Hm...interesting. You'd better not drop Greava. And you'll be happy to know that Andy wrote SIX PAGES of GOTU today! Doesn't that make you happy? Oh, and good write...this is interesting. Love the descriptive images.