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| thisspiltmilk 2005-02-02 ch 1,  | abusehey, i didn't know i never reviewed this for you. i love that you used me as one of the characters. thats awesome. frankie, very cool, despite the fact that the name frankie for a girl is absolutely gross, sorry. anyways, i love this story, even if it is uber short. its pretty fantastic like everything else you write ever and a half million point 5. anyways, get to updating love. yargh. |
| William G. Thorne 2004-12-14 ch 1, | abuseI love how you developed your characters, very nicely done. and your use of words, can you say perfect. Loved it. Blessed be. ~William |
| Sarah-Brighteyes 2004-12-14 ch 1, | abuseInteresting...shows how lies spiral. You make up one lie and the rest flow just as easily. Nice writing though. The flow of it was quick paced and kept my attention. I also liked the subtle humor. Great job. |