oO wow! that was great!! i mean great!! like wow! i wish i had read this earlier, this is WOW! you are definetly a good writer, better than that, an incredible author! ok i'm done now. moooooooo

Wow...your writing style is superb. You have a lot of talent with imagery--metaphors and such. I was very impressed, especially with the tone. It was a fine balance between what seemed the torment of Poe and the brilliance of Shakespeare. Very well done.

Hello! You took a look at my story "Foundation of the Wehrn" a while back and I haven't had the chance to return the favor yet. Sorry about that! I'm here now though, so allow me to review! :)

1.) "Like a star it flies to the skies" -- This is picky, perhaps, but stars don't fly TO the skies. They might fly THROUGH or ACROSS the skies, but not TO.

2.) "My stories villains have crept into my heart" -- stories', since it's possessive.

3.) "What good is doctor" -- Do you mean "A doctor"?

4.) " it is to be music" -- Here you use "it", but previously you were talking about "my manuscripts" (plural). Thus, "it" should be "they" throughout this sentence.

5.) "to meet his lives passion" -- "life's". Again, this is possessive. Be careful about this error!! Read it as "the passion of his life", and write accordingly.

6.) "I am struck with grief my almighty Zeus" -- Ok, I've noticed a few times where you call upon someone (like "Zeus", here), and don't use a comma to separate the calling-phrase from the rest of the sentence. For example: "I am struck with grief {COMMA!} my almighty Zeus". Otherwise it can be a little confusing to read. Make sense? Run through the story and find the rest of the times you do this now, also. :)

7.) "Black shadows wash away onto the wooden floor." -- I just liked this phrase.

8.) "chiffonier" -- The WHAT?! :) You found a word I don't know. Congrats!

9.) "my hand find its place" -- "finds".

10.) "And all reality washes away." -- This is a fine ending, but you might consider altering to reflect the musical content you've been talking about (in italics) throughout the poem. Sort of tie it all together that way.

Rather depressing and melancholy, and definitely a we bit of an overdramatic persona, but that's what you intended, I'm sure. Well done!

*sigh* I need to get to work. Thanks, and good luck writing! --Ruatha

WOW! You really captured a true writer's thoughts and emotions. This was really good! :) :)

Captive last line. I enjoy reading your words of love that you use. Very nice.

Okay I am not trying to be cheesey but that was beutiful... I really really liked it. You use such beutiful words.. I am going to continue reading all your stuff untill I have read them all, just like you did for me...

This is your best work yet. I am truly and utterly impressed. ~*accolades*~

Ah, fever has its merits - or whatever the word is that I'm looking for. This, this is just ... Beautiful. Beautiful. Beautiful. Beautiful. Beautiful. Beautiful. Repeat. Repeat. Repeat countless times, then add in a flawless picture of bishie of your choice. Yes, beautiful. I think I forgot to breathe while reading, I really did. Oh wow, there is nothing else to describe this piece except: utterly, utterly beautiful. Beautiful! I don't know how many times I can type that word into this review, but that number will still be lacking in its description for this ... beautiful ... masterpiece. I swear, I will find a way to bow down to you the instant I next see you to worship this beautiful, beautiful artwork. Beautiful! I don't even want to write my name at the end in fear that it will sully this amazingly beautiful piece. Hell, this makes me ashamed of everything I've ever written thus far and practically awes me into blissful oblivion. This is by far one of the most beautiful pieces I have ever read. Beautiful! Beautiful! Beautiful! If you hang up your hat and retire now, the world will remember your name - that is how beautiful this is.

O_o oh my...so beautiful, descriptive, yet sad all at once, the most beautiful piece i've ever read in my life so far. where did you get the inspiration for this, you really let others read this since it's magnificance is so bright! plz write more soon and i'll update something soon ok?-anime freakizoid X^_^X

Wow. Beautiful... I can't say any more.

This was truly amazing! i can totally relate. You are a very talented writer! I'll read more of your stuff later ((studying for exams...urgh lol))

Is this about writer's block? Because I can relate to every word. It's how I feel most of the time, as if I will never get back my ability to write something I think of as "good". And then I end up getting really scared that maybe somehow I've lost all my ability to write. It's a vicious cycle. Great piece though! ~Abigail