Oh my gosh, this is so sad and beautiful! It's very true, kinda like the Beatle's song, "All You Need is Love".You're very talented, and I look forward to reading more from you.

Very powerful- the ending was perfect. Love it.

it's so sad...

Awesome job in writing this. I understood and i liked the little bit of rhyme that you were able to put in. I almost understand how this feels. I believe that you wrote a good thing that can apply to many people. Great job in writing it. Piecing it together like that must have been a challenge. Whenever you are alone though, 'member that there is always someone out there that loves you. I know I do, even though we have never met, but I know you through your work. Great job.

Sad, powerful, nailed emotions down, got it all down great . . . great job, and I told you I'd catch up on your poems one day lol

aw very sad and powerful.. especially the ending

I loved this. You rhymed it so well. WAh I wish I could rhyme like you! It was so sad...I'm not going to kill myself anytime soon so no one needs to worry. But this was seriously very angsty, I loved it! I love angst! I do have to start reading the rest of your story...and I will once this dumb cold goes away. Anyways don't forget my stories whenever you have time. C-ya in another review.

wow.. great job! it sounded like a lot of poems i've read, but you took it a step further by adding all that heavenly stuff. wonderfully done, the rhyming, the emotions, the descriptions... great job!