Oh I love this...I completely understand it and it's such a powerful emotion, reasoning, thoughts...amazing! The whole poem rocks...Love, Mia

These words are hard and hollow compared to the swelling in my heart.Even now as i reflect on inflection and nounce i feel pains in the deepest pars of my heart to know that there is such a wellspring of power inside these few lines. And i wonder if your words move me so, why have i stayed from you fo so long? Beautiful poem. ~Nat

I like the title. Not bad just I like your older stuff but I like the light imagery in this. Agh, I'm useless at reviews but I just thought I'd check ou some of your stuff. It's been a while but I still love the stuff you have too lately.

Jenna xoxo

wow.. very well written and powerful

good again. ~jenny~

OH very nice! Full of feeling and emotion. Great metaphors and description too! Great work!-pax