I'm sorry, but scrimbling random "unkempt" thoughts do not make words into poetry. Please reflect on the hallowness and pointlessness of this piece. You are disappointing, to say the least.

ok. I think you're way harsh on yourself. but this was a fun read. I read your bio and we have some things in common so don't feel like society is out to get . I play the piano and the flute too. I'm also into swimming and choir at my school. Any way, this was unique. YOu don't read something like this every day. Keep up the good .s. keep it