really liked this coz i find myself thinking about this a lot lately but well done the short lines really adds to the effect of the poem and the flow was just beautiful. lots of love ~AllyCred~

thats awesome. I love how it developes from the statement of you being cold to describe the situation and then how you feel about it. I'll definately keep checking up on you.

another nice, sweet poem. very enticing.

Great poem! Good work! Keep writing!Thank you very much for your review!-Anna :)

I like it. The part about knowing that someone notices you. Great job.

Great stuff. I love the short lines as well. They really add to the speed and flow in the poem. Very nicely written-Keith Andrew