|Reviews for MaryJane's bruises|
| The Rain's Kiss 6/7/05 . chapter 1
this is a beautiful and sad poem. I liked it because it was not the typical everyday, run-of-the mill kind of poem about love and death and hate (not that I don't like those). Very creative. Way to use your poetic skills in a new, different light.
| kit feral 5/17/05 . chapter 1
That was so sad. But amazing. Very well written, but still really sad. And the ending was perfect. My favorite line was "Mary-Jane’s hair hangs low". I do that a lot. It just reminded me of myself. Very good work, keep writing!
| lovelikeamixtape 5/5/05 . chapter 1
Wow. Do whatever you can to track down whoever originally said that on the train and give them a big hug 'cause this is awesome. 3
| BlueRose218 4/27/05 . chapter 1
That's scary... I know too many people that behave like MaryJane for that not to hit home. I myself usually wear my hair over my face. Incredible, I can't believe you write this well. My poetry pales in comparison to yours.
| grim-dreamer 4/21/05 . chapter 1
You're good at drawing out sympathy. Very good overall.
| addie pray 2/26/05 . chapter 1
Tragically beautiful. I consider you a very talented writer, and I hope you continue writing.
| kayttea 2/16/05 . chapter 1
aw. that really sad. very deep and touching poem. very well written. i LOVED it!
| darkmistresslae 2/15/05 . chapter 1
another great poem. you're work is really good!
| in theory 1/1/05 . chapter 1
Very nice form, I love the short sentences, they have power in them. PS, your pen name rocks!
| Aslan Israel 12/16/04 . chapter 1
Very sad and emotional.
| East-0f-Eden 12/15/04 . chapter 1
Wow! Mary Jane reminds me of me!