wow i really like this one lol

Once again, another great one. I really loved the line. whisper on my ear tell me what i want to hear. it was really good.

Huh. Well, your writings not bad...but, I hardly even say this... It's way too dramatic in my opinion. I'm like flowery, drama girl... but even that was a little too much for me. Silver linings, and cloud-thingys...just a little too much. However... You had some great lines... like "and whisper in my hear, tell me what I want to hear." I relaize it's your expression...the essense of you...but I thing that all that fluff is going to be a little overwhelming for most of the general public.