I love mech stories, but I wasn't expecting quite such a close man-machine interface...

An interesting story, certainly, and well written. Very unusual! :-)

Well, i liked this story a lot. The beginning was a little slow to start, but it picked up, and it picked up fast to become a really great, really engrossing story. Continue it, please.

I like this, I mean I don't quite understand it, but I assume it will become more clear as the story continues. There are a few conventional errors, but I'm probably the only one bugged by that. Definitely it's well-worded.

Sounds interesting so far. I like!

I would be willing to proof-read your stuff before you put it up if you would like! =D heehee.

you can email me if you would like.. or not no biggie.

*Silent Writer*

Thank you for you review on 'Love'

This has somewhat of an unconventional beginning. Azertis is an interesting character. His arm kind of scares me though. The whole sphere/mind thing also has my interest. So far this has potentinal as long as the story stays strong. Anyway good chapter.