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Reviews For: Emotions

autumn berrington 2006-07-30 ch 1,	abusei like how you had a rythmic pattern to it...i just cant seem to write good ryhmey poems. but your great at it! ~Autumn~
Leaving Here 2006-06-22 ch 1,	abusel love it. truly hearfelt! :)~Liz
PermanentComatose 2006-06-18 ch 1,	abuseoh my gosh. I really like this one. I can TOTALLY relate. I am currently in the same postion. This girl asked out this guy I know 'cause he was hot. I totally understand. Very well done. I love it and keep writing!~inmyshadow22 AKA Rachel
sunshineofyourlife 2006-06-17 ch 1,	abuse'my sleeve has been torn off'^^kind of makes me think of wearing your heart on your sleeve. yep...been there. 'you might turn around and leave,' 'i'm waiting 'till you break up with her.' have you read my story 'american mormon' i could really use your insight. --Sunshine
A.H. Fenald 2006-05-21 ch 1,	abuseI like this! The way you have worded it really rocked. Well, I hope you read some of my new poems I have up and maybe my stories too. I'd like to have your input...
AuthorNinjaEarth 2006-05-02 ch 1,	abuseOh man, I understand this, though the situation was reversed. I know that was years ago, but it still lives on in my memory. Thanks for sharing;excellent work!
Needa S 2006-04-29 ch 1,	abuseGreat imagery, beautiful write.
Melissa O'Day 2006-04-25 ch 1,	abusethis is very nice! thank you for the postive comment you left on See My Heart. -Melissa O'Day
Lauren Raven 2005-09-14 ch 1,	abuseLike it up until the last line; the rhyme seems kind of forced. Otherwise the poem is pretty good.
simpleplan13 2004-12-15 ch 1,	abuseaw well good luck with that.. nice poem... great rhyming
Sarah-Brighteyes 2004-12-15 ch 1,	abuseO very nice. Good rhyming and great imagery with the sleeve. I think everyone has been there at one time or another so they can relate. I know I have. Good peice.

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