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| Ivory Taint 2007-03-06 ch 1,  | abuseLoved it. Eloquent yet easy to understand and relate to. And so much passion. ^_^ |
| Rachel-Jane Kensington 2006-12-04 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was beautiful. Simple, but the diction was tres powerful. Lovliness! -rachel |
| whentherainfalls 2005-12-11 ch 1, | abuseoh. me likey very much. this is something in common that we like to write about. yay! lol.anyways i like this alot.thnks for your reviews.ash. |
| Falconer Aysel 2005-10-18 ch 1, | abuseOh. Creepy. I can see this person crying and stumbling about. Is this guy abusive or did he just leave? Oh, the unanswered questions! Delectable! -Aysel |
| designer amnesiac 2005-09-17 ch 1, | abusePoetically beautiful. You need no metaphors to try and equip the mind with better understanding. Its truly not needed. You're a fabulous writer. |
| acrobia 2005-08-03 ch 1, | abuseLovely piece, the lines are captivating and drawing, the imagery is also great =) I loved the lines "But my keys fumble/In the ignition", and the continuity of "And I see the sky/The lake/Your eyes" - it's just a wonderful transition of color. keep up the good work!xo - Acrobia |
| The Proxy Ninja 2005-08-02 ch 1, | abuse[With in the blue.] *Within, ne? This is sad. ... -.- |
| WannaBWriter 2005-04-20 ch 1, | abusewith every workof yours that i read i am more amazed! i can't pick a favorite. perfect word usage. and its a topic everyone can easily relate to yet its something no one knows how to deal with. great job! |
| XxDragon Princess NikkixX 2005-03-21 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this one. Not only is it a beautiful poem but it tells a story as well. |
| someone.anyone 2005-01-20 ch 1, | abuse*smiles* too true... |
| ThreePac 2005-01-11 ch 1, | abusenice simple words form into strong meaning. each line is short but each line means so much. why as people do we continue to stay with that that brings us tears, with that that causes fear? I wish I knew the answer but I really understand what u are saying in this poem. |
| zeusfluff 2005-01-06 ch 1, | abuseThis one's deep too! ~Melissa~ ~La Señorita Maria~ |
| HideAwayFairy 2005-01-06 ch 1, | abuseI'm stuck within a blue right now too. I like this poem a lot |
| crystaltearsBYcrystalfears 2004-12-30 ch 1, | abuse::sigh:: such conflict. understandable, completely understandable. but insane at the same time |
| co0kieCrazii 2004-12-22 ch 1, | abusevery creative poem...i can actually feel what you're talking about. (^.^) |