wow, kinda disturbing, i like it.

I really loved this piece. Lots of people could relate to this.

creepy but i like it

Wow... I love this... (I eem to love everything from you o_O) I think a lot of people can relate. =)

Such a perfectionist. I would hate to have a parent like that and I'm glad i dont. It's really good though. Write more write more write it could be a Christmas present for me.

Wow very interesting thinking piece. I love the irony dripping off every line. Nice peice.

Kind of creepy. I like the repition of Hello and a pet name. Lots of parents do this and it's damaging.I'm a little confused about the italics. Some seem to be for emphasis and others implied thouhts of the girl? Not sure but doesn't matter any how.Great poem.