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| Broken and Beautiful 2008-03-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was great!! lol completly agree. not only was it true but it was beautifully written as well! ~good job ~Broken and Beautiful |
| je suis une pomme du terre. 2006-07-30 ch 1,  | abuseWow... that's great! So true too. Men are b@$t@rd$! I love this poem so much!! Hehe... you've got a lot of passion in this one. *favs* |
| BoMbShELL 2006-07-28 ch 1, | abuseDO YOU KNOW HOW MANY TIMES I'VE FELT LIKE THAT! Except I could never find the right words...you pretty much summed up every bad thought i've ever had about male race in this poem...awesome~Dm |
| AestheticIdiosyncratic 2006-05-31 ch 1, | abuseWow - I am completely blown away by the anger, despise and loathing I feel towards the male species.I know exactly how you feel: my sodding ex-boyfriend dumped me on my bloody birthing.I loved the exquiste line of: "Men should be whipped and maliciously beaten, Then tastefully salted and joyfully eaten."It blew me away and I felt myself nodding along with it because it's true.Your poem is skillfully written; I wish I could capture the same images in the way you have. It is packs quite a punch with the rhyming scheme.Please keep up writing! ~Idio |
| Acts.of.Whimsy 2006-04-04 ch 1, | abuseomfg! i ttly agree! (sigh) i commend u. that was simply beautiful! hating the entire race of males is a common problem n i find from time 2 time i suffer from it 2. ;D i really liked this! ~urXpoeticXfrend P.S.-hey i just got a new poem up. would u be so kind and take a look at it? thnx! |
| L0st.S0uL 2005-11-20 ch 1, | abusewow hahaha i agree... |
| Abby Sequioa 2005-08-27 ch 1, | abusewonderfuly written... I especially like how you empahsized some words and no others... amazing job! |
| flimsy sky 2005-06-12 ch 1, | abuseI love this poem, you speak for the girl population! Luv ya! |
| bloody tears and sugar vien... 2005-05-19 ch 1, | abusewicked cool. feministic but radically true. applause for you |
| Anotherlovesickteen 2005-04-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseArgh i know i hate men, can't live with them can't blow them into oblivion,oh wait maybe you can (hee hee) |
| Memoir 2005-02-01 ch 1, | abusei adore responses too !i totally agree with the removal of male genitilia! oh god if only it were legal? how many people would i have castrated by now.. i love this poem. :) excellent |
| infamously-anonymous 2005-02-01 ch 1, | abuse"man bashing fun" I totally agree with your description of this. It's great. Sometimes some guys are just so... guyish, and in need of a man bashing session. Definately. |
| rap-sucks 2005-01-17 ch 1, | abuseholy ** this is crazy cool, and it sucks that those shallow bastards give all us guys a bad name... |
| Dusk Has Fallen 2005-01-15 ch 1, | abuseOh my how true. It made me laugh and want to cry at the same time *shakes head* But I liked it! Thanks for all the reviews, please continue to read my work as I continue to read yours! |
| Meg St. James 2004-12-23 ch 1, | abuseawesome poem. Totally true, and totally loved it. It made me smile.~Meg |