THIS IS AN EPIC MASTERPIECE OF SUCH MAGNITUDE THAT THE WHOLE WORLD SHOULD ENJOY IT! Are you published? You really should be. Blessed be! x

interesting, original, and LONG! it keeps the reader pretty into it, though; good writing!

YAY! More on the sad Selkie. Although...in this is says the Selkie dies, but in the other she's alive? Okies...I need to work...

The rhymes makes the whole story flow gracefully.