I've always loved this story, Lily, it's one of my favorites. It's so sweet, so...I don't know, it just feels... right.

Oh, I liked it. I love Celtic folklore. As a one-shot it's good, but it could have been developed a little more, especially in some parts that just feel a little glossed over. And it may be a little trite, but it's sweet. Gabriella's history seems a bit - inconsistent, implausible? But overall it's well written.

Well written but you could've developed it into so much more, you had a great plotline and it would be interesting to see it in a longer version.

Hello I like your story! well duh..so many must say that huh...well...hmm...SUGOI it is very well written. I wish it were longer though. Other than that i like your descriptions and how it all flowed together. Good work good job! ^__^ Bye for now!~Zeheria