So true...i like how you've put this across. I really like the last two lines.. Lozfairy x

It would of been cool if you ended the poem with the word parasuicide but either way it's realy good. It's obviously powerful knowing where these truthful thoughts came from and defenitely worth the read. Greatness!

interesting. i'm sure there's many many more terms out there as well...

powerful, definetly powerful.. and angry.. beautiful.. love it! and you of course...love zai

wow. thats really powerful. it truly is, because no matter how much blood flows, tears down your cheeks, the pain wont stop as a result. Well written, keep it up.

this is good, really makes you think, and i agree totally, your parents sisters aunts or whatever will ignore the fact ur "cutting" because it is better then most things. i know from experience so i see were your coming from, i am gonna go ahead and read the rest of your stuff and thanks for the review!

Beautiful, powerful, proof that noone can admit that cutters are out there, they are everywhere, and not going to stop if you just shove it under the rug. We need help. thank you for writing this, never stop. lotsa luv, miss-fev

Hey really cool Alex, really gets across the point. very well written, nice work. love you-Keith Andrew

OMG! so kinda graphic bt i like writing.