|Reviews for The gun is right in front of you|
| in theory 12/6/05 . chapter 1
I often stumble across sentences like this inside my mind when I'm musing, rarely write them though..which I know is evil because that's how you kill spontaneity. I've calmed down a little since my last review (shame..?), and yeah, just read yours and I'm all hyped up again. The more I read of yours the more a girl/poet/actualperson forms in my mind (not to sound creepy or anything), and it just gets more complete and interesting with each new (and old) piece. Yeah, internet-madness is catching. Shalom -)
PS: Good to hear about your settled lovelife, settled is good but make sure it's not flat. (if that sounds funny ignore it, it was meant to be impartial advice, but my weirdness is poking through...again!)
| circumspice 9/14/05 . chapter 1
Wow.I hope I managed to pack as much emotion into that one word as you did into these two lines.
| Elzzar 2/19/05 . chapter 1
That was puzzling... a million different meanings struck into the air with, once again, a select handful of words.
| Plato's Socialist Democracy 1/31/05 . chapter 1
Loveliness in times of stress is something so unpredictably wonderful that I hope you are not scorning it for that would be a tradgedy unto itself Juliet.
| RoseFairy2005 1/14/05 . chapter 1
wow. very deep. there is no word to really describe what ran through my head when reading up the wonderful work!
| Katie123 1/5/05 . chapter 1
short&straight to the point. i love it...and im still 14.
| katiebuggie 12/30/04 . chapter 1
I can SO relate because that's what I was going through a few weeks ago.
| deathfairy20 12/19/04 . chapter 1
very good keep up the good work
| Crimsonoaks 12/18/04 . chapter 1
nice and slightly eerie. good job.
| SaveMeToo 12/17/04 . chapter 1
Short, to the point, and beyond amazing, I am 15, and i can realte.
| keltica 12/17/04 . chapter 1
I passed by to greet you :D ... again a short though interesting poem ...
keltica, the celtic fire from within
and who said you were faithless? :P :P
| Aslan Israel 12/16/04 . chapter 1
That's just creepy, but somehow ironic... do I make any sense?
| tyrantvirus 12/16/04 . chapter 1
a haiku is five, seven, five. This one is seven, seven, seven. And haikus are meant to be used to describe a nature type scene.
| simpleplan13 12/16/04 . chapter 1
that was odd... but i liked it