|Reviews for Leaving the inner curve of your heart|
| UsagiNeko 1/24/05 . chapter 1
Very beautiful poem. I love the style of your writing. Excellent job, keep writing!
| only weekdays 1/14/05 . chapter 1
woah, the structure of the poem is so unique! And i love the title/first line! SCORE.
| cherry-luard 1/12/05 . chapter 1
This is an excellent poem! The structure helps emphazie the indecision and difficulty, and at the same time the bliss in the relationship. great job
| Deirdra Chaeli 1/10/05 . chapter 1
...and we see the source of your penname. The pain and longing within the lines here are absolutely overwhelming; although understated within the words, they still hold captivating power. There are a few spelling mistakes (incasing should be encasing) but they do not detract from the emotion of your work.
| Made in U.S.A 12/27/04 . chapter 1
powerfull and your words are filled with beauty.
| deathfairy20 12/19/04 . chapter 1
very good keep up the good work
| Kasatriya 12/18/04 . chapter 1
This is such a good poem...very well written!
| logical-unreason 12/16/04 . chapter 1
Beautiful... Every emotion is personified by every word, beatingly strong and powerful.