Very beautiful poem. I love the style of your writing. Excellent job, keep writing!

woah, the structure of the poem is so unique! And i love the title/first line! SCORE.

This is an excellent poem! The structure helps emphazie the indecision and difficulty, and at the same time the bliss in the relationship. great job

...and we see the source of your penname. The pain and longing within the lines here are absolutely overwhelming; although understated within the words, they still hold captivating power. There are a few spelling mistakes (incasing should be encasing) but they do not detract from the emotion of your work.

powerfull and your words are filled with beauty.

very good keep up the good work

This is such a good poem...very well written!

Beautiful... Every emotion is personified by every word, beatingly strong and powerful.