   Poptart Guava Kid 2009-02-16 . chapter 4amazing, awesome,...and beautiful. pity it hasnt been updated. do you plan on continuing it at all? |
 kuri 2005-02-27 . chapter 4 awesome. update soon |
 blood thirst 33 2005-02-24 . chapter 1A few misconceptions about our kind, but in general it's pretty good... Hm... Dracula wasn't very accurate if you ask me, and I of all people would know, being a child of about four centuries myself... I mean, I'm looking into a mirror right now and I see my reflection perfectly. I love your writing style though... |
 Thunder Goddes Kino 2005-02-16 . chapter 4Wow...the ending was really touching. A normally emotion-less vampire now shedding tears after feeding on his pray...which happened to be a priest ^^; You are a crazy one Bee-chan, but it was a good twist and I really liked the chapter. The names were really interesting too, can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^ |
 Anime Freakizoid 2005-02-16 . chapter 4the end was sad, i feel bad for him! i hope aranael can comfort him of that problem, but everything is so erotic and sensual keep up the great work!-anime freakizoid |
 Esquirella 2005-02-16 . chapter 2Great imagery! |
 afk 2005-02-16 . chapter 4that was cute, poor micholai T_T
yu}upodate update! |
 DMLpacker 2005-02-08 . chapter 3oh good fic. Please update. I'm obsessed with vampires |
| afk 2005-01-08 . chapter 3 O.o update soon! *poke poke* OMG! Nicholai is so hot XD can't wait T_T |
| Thunder Goddes Kino 2005-01-02 . chapter 3 I liked how you seemed to give Raine a different appearance and such from most girls, with the slightly deeper voice and such. The Jello part was so adorable too ^_^ lol Anyway, it's going along nicely as of now, and the ending was a good clincher for the chapter. I await Chapter 4 |
 Necromania 2005-01-01 . chapter 3Whelp...he didnt actually Kiss him yet.
He *wanted* to. I think I should clarify that a little better... *ahem* But thanks for all the reviews so far! If you have any sugestions on what should happen in chappie 4, please let me know and I'll see if I can incorporate it. |
| Anime Freakizoid 2005-01-01 . chapter 3 aw he kissed aranael! so cute and sexy! another entertaining and humorous chapter! i really look forward to the next chapter, i hope it'll be quite dark and erotic!-anime freakizoid X^_^X |
| Kuri 2005-01-01 . chapter 3 Nicholai sounds absolutly yummy. |
| Staris 2004-12-31 . chapter 3 fun chapter!! please please please update soon!! ah i love Nicholai (love the name by the way lol) anyways, really enjoyed the lunch room scene as well ^.^ he was adorable haha anyways update soon! |
| Anime Freakizoid 2004-12-27 . chapter 2 that's cool how evangeline is half shape-shifter, that would be so damn fun! wonderful chapter as always, hope you update soon...-anime freakizoid X^_^X |
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