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| littlewitchgirl77 2007-11-20 ch 15,  | abusegood story so far keep it up |
| WickedChristie90 2007-09-16 ch 17, | abusePLEASE UPDATE! |
| svmgeleta 2007-08-18 ch 1, | abusehm, wolfeboro? does this take place in NH? and the lake is lake Winnapesaki (sorry, i'm terrible at spelling) good fist chapter! |
| Sonyashinto 2007-03-27 ch 17, | abusethis is a very interesting. i am looking forward to the next chapter. please update soon. Thank You! Ja-Ne =^_^= |
| RegretfulEuphoriaBooks 2007-01-06 ch 1, | abuseFirst off I would like to say that this is a very well written peice of fiction, and You're keeping me up whith the intreging storyline. However, there are a lot of little mistakes that (I feel) keep this good peice of work, from being a great peice of work. Spelling and Grammer are your major problems and I'm happy to say that they are definately the easiest to fix. (Just run your spell/grammer check if you're using a word-esque program, or find someone to edit it for you.) Do that and I will be more than pleased with this really great story. |
| atreyu love 2007-01-05 ch 17, | abuseo. perv XD hes going after his sons woman XD not that he prbly knows that :D so can you please update? (no offense but you do have a bit of a grammar/spelling issue) but alls good :D |
| atreyu love 2007-01-05 ch 1, | abuseinteresting :D |
| Sexy Vampire Princess 2007-01-04 ch 17, | abuseLove it. I've been waiting for like, forever for this. But please update soon. I know you have school or work. WE ALL DO BUT don't forget thi story because I'm a fan that likes reading thigs to the end. |
| East-0f-Eden 2007-01-04 ch 17, | abusegood I'm glad you updated! It makes me happy I want to see you finish the story! :D |
| DiegoManuelR 2007-01-02 ch 1, | abuseHeh. This is really good. I got to admit Layla is an interesting character. :3 |
| MyNameIsMad 2006-09-16 ch 1, | abuseWerewolves ARE FREAKING AWSOME!! I don't have time to read the other chapters now, but I definately will! Great start! -Mad p.s. I added you to my favorite author list. Please R&R my stories. (Urf, please!) |
| DrkAngl15 2006-08-10 ch 16, | abusevery interesting...now this is just my opinion, but i think the story would be more interesting if you had described the first time they had sex...that always makes it more interesting and you get a better sense of the character's feelings for each other...but i love the story! |
| Darkened Torch 2006-07-15 ch 3, | abuseHi! I think you have a wonderful plot going here, but there are some grammatical errors that need to be brought up. In the fourth chapter I noticed you went from using ed, to speaking as if it were happening now. Maybe this is corrected in future chapters, and I plan to find out, but I woulds stick with 'ed if at the end of words if I were you. Also there are sentences that are messed up a bit, meaning two words are right beside each other, but they shouldn't be. I just wanted to point those out to help you. I really like your story. Its unigue and Dar sounds super gorgeous. Good job on all your success. See ya! |
| StormRider68 2006-02-21 ch 16, | abuseI like this story VERY much!^_^...1 question...does my pen name REALLY sounds like a guy? I got the idea from some cambodian movie my mom watched...anyways, I hope you keep up the good work! |
| Boogyoogy 2006-01-07 ch 16, | abusegood good please continue |