good story so far keep it up

PLEASE UPDATE!

hm, wolfeboro? does this take place in NH? and the lake is lake Winnapesaki (sorry, i'm terrible at spelling)

good fist chapter!

this is a very interesting. i am looking forward to the next chapter. please update soon.
Thank You!

Ja-Ne =^_^=

First off I would like to say that this is a very well written peice of fiction, and You're keeping me up whith the intreging storyline.

However, there are a lot of little mistakes that (I feel) keep this good peice of work, from being a great peice of work. Spelling and Grammer are your major problems and I'm happy to say that they are definately the easiest to fix. (Just run your spell/grammer check if you're using a word-esque program, or find someone to edit it for you.) Do that and I will be more than pleased with this really great story.

o. perv XD hes going after his sons woman XD not that he prbly knows that :D so can you please update? (no offense
but you do have a bit of a grammar/spelling issue) but alls good :D

interesting :D

Love it. I've been waiting for like, forever for this. But please update soon. I know you have school or work. WE ALL DO BUT don't forget thi story because I'm a fan that likes reading thigs to the end.

good I'm glad you updated! It makes me happy I want to see you finish the story! :D

Heh. This is really good. I got to admit Layla is an interesting character. :3

Werewolves ARE FREAKING AWSOME!! I don't have time to read the other chapters now, but I definately will! Great start!

-Mad

p.s. I added you to my favorite author list. Please R&R my stories. (Urf, please!)

very interesting...now this is just my opinion, but i think the story would be more interesting if you had described the first time they had sex...that always makes it more interesting and you get a better sense of the character's feelings for each other...but i love the story!

Hi! I think you have a wonderful plot going here, but there are some grammatical errors that need to be brought up. In the fourth chapter I noticed you went from using ed, to speaking as if it were happening now. Maybe this is corrected in future chapters, and I plan to find out, but I woulds stick with 'ed if at the end of words if I were you. Also there are sentences that are messed up a bit, meaning two words are right beside each other, but they shouldn't be.

I just wanted to point those out to help you. I really like your story. Its unigue and Dar sounds super gorgeous. Good job on all your success. See ya!

I like this story VERY much!^_^...1 question...does my pen name REALLY sounds like a guy? I got the idea from some cambodian movie my mom watched...anyways, I hope you keep up the good work!

good good please continue