o, this was beautiful, i muchly enjoyed reading it, love the way the words sound, really like a whispering poem, i like that, lovely poem

Wow...this is so beautiful! With amazing metaphores and imagery...you are one of the best authors I've ever seen on ficpress! This is so beautiful...I adore the first stanza! Oh dear...I'm speechless and this review sucks but what can I say? Amazing! Love, Mia

that was really good stuff. you work is always really abstract, but that's what makes it really unique.

I've liked some of your other work a bit more, but i think it's just preference, cuz i din't see anything wrong with it.

Great work my friend, and that first line was weird, like it grabbed the reader pretty fast, great write!

Aquarius slain--haunting echoes remain. m