i like it so fari like how u gave every zodiac its looks and personalityplease continue

very well done, plz continue

i like how each charicter has their own motive

Interesting so far. Keep it up!

well i like the concecpt of the story but with so few explanations and details to ur story u really cant get a good pic of what goin on, but i still think the idea so id love to see a new chapterthanx

how can the cosmos ever let yin & yang to be unbalanced?

the story seems to be lacking somthing currently...it just doesn't seem to grab me and pull me in... the descriptions need some work...

don;t get me wrong, im not trying to rag on you...just trying to improve your writing

i can see that ur point for this chapter is to never get all the signs of the zodiac into one room all at once... ^^...

just as a suggestion...u might want to put a list of charicters and discriptions (personalities and looks) as one of the chapters, since not every body knows the zodiac by heart...that way slow ppl like me wont get a confusion headache

a bit odd and kinda confusing...but all first chapters are