i really loved this poem. your style is very enchanting and filled with deep thought and complicated metaphores, which is something i try to capture but fail. Well done, i look forward to reading more of your poetry :)Rhiannon x

This poem is very beautiful...although change due to dew. This reminds me of the Time Traveler's Wife. READ IT IF YOU HAVEN'T.

Very good poem. I like how the poem moves so quickly through time, and yet stays completely in the present.

It seems to me that children and babies are a running aspect of some of your poems.

That's a great poem. I know a bit of that feeling- thre are times when I feel older than my new sixteen years, but so much more often I feel like a baby. And a lot at the same time...

Beautiful. I was drawn in by the title, but it flows so well, I wanted it to keep going on and on.

great flow and perfectly written as usual. keep writing :D

Nice words - and it flowed nicely. In the beginning I got a kind of delicate feeling and it changed in the middle and went back to that in the end...So basically all that meant I liked it. If you can check out my stuff.

very good keep up the good work

morning due on my eye lashes...dewto fell my belly filled...feel

wow... that is an interesting concept the whole wnating children yet being a child... great poem

Ying & Yang bounces heart-man to woman each in kind. 'Til united they go forth-crawl as child. m

Wow beautiful..I love this poem. One of the best I have read tonight. brilliant write.

This was excellent, it's going on my favorites list. I loved it. "Is it possible to age twenty years in twenty seconds?" Great line. I don't know what else to say, but I adored this.