|Reviews for Circle|
| RazorbladeRizzy 1/12/05 . chapter 1
i really loved this poem. your style is very enchanting and filled with deep thought and complicated metaphores, which is something i try to capture but fail. Well done, i look forward to reading more of your poetry :)Rhiannon x
| Kalopsia 1/2/05 . chapter 1
This poem is very beautiful...although change due to dew. This reminds me of the Time Traveler's Wife. READ IT IF YOU HAVEN'T.
| Quilir 1/2/05 . chapter 1
Very good poem. I like how the poem moves so quickly through time, and yet stays completely in the present.
It seems to me that children and babies are a running aspect of some of your poems.
| Saeger 1/1/05 . chapter 1
That's a great poem. I know a bit of that feeling- thre are times when I feel older than my new sixteen years, but so much more often I feel like a baby. And a lot at the same time...
| in theory 12/31/04 . chapter 1
Beautiful. I was drawn in by the title, but it flows so well, I wanted it to keep going on and on.
| Made in U.S.A 12/27/04 . chapter 1
great flow and perfectly written as usual. keep writing :D
| Dying Without Gackt 12/26/04 . chapter 1
Nice words - and it flowed nicely. In the beginning I got a kind of delicate feeling and it changed in the middle and went back to that in the end...So basically all that meant I liked it. If you can check out my stuff.
| deathfairy20 12/19/04 . chapter 1
very good keep up the good work
| simpleplan13 12/17/04 . chapter 1
morning due on my eye lashes...dewto fell my belly filled...feel
wow... that is an interesting concept the whole wnating children yet being a child... great poem
| Manuel Fajar 12/17/04 . chapter 1
Ying & Yang bounces heart-man to woman each in kind. 'Til united they go forth-crawl as child. m
| Sarah-Brighteyes 12/16/04 . chapter 1
Wow beautiful..I love this poem. One of the best I have read tonight. brilliant write.
| Miscellaneous 12/16/04 . chapter 1
This was excellent, it's going on my favorites list. I loved it. "Is it possible to age twenty years in twenty seconds?" Great line. I don't know what else to say, but I adored this.