something i, and lots of other ppl can relate to...sad losing good friends like tht...sorry for ur loss

like the way its so short yet it says so much...

Sopmething we can ALL relate to. =) Well done.

~ Noelle ~

i would make the one u into youwroung... wrong

great poem.. I can definately relate.. I like how it started with and.. that worked really well

Very honest poem. I think alot of people go through this...when they find out a person isnt who they say they are. Perhaps you should share your feelings with the person you wrote this poem about...perhaps. Good peice.