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| nothing but treble 2005-06-19 ch 1,  | abusethis one, i think, is actually one of your best. there is absolutely nothing wrong with free-verse, really strict rhyme and meter are easier to be seen as childish and harder to be creative with, so there's no shame in testing the limits of your art with free verse. |
| Sarah-Brighteyes 2004-12-16 ch 1, | abuseHmm very nice...something hits home with it..especially the very last line. Though with me more of a spiritual thing with a friend...but anways. I loved the flow of it. Good piece. |