Awesome work. Really unique. Beautiful. :)

~* Noelle *~

Ah, you're still my favorite poet, despite the prolonged (sp?) absence. A metaphor for your newfound college life, I assume? Hope you're enjoying it there.

Lovely hearing from you after all this time. I hope you'll write more soon.

Wow! This is original. Beautiful work. I like how everything is so simple... and this whole complex idea makes sense. Much-o cool ^_^

~ CoolBeans18s

wow, the 1st line has to be the punchline...nice way to tie in science. The rythm gets enhanced by the rhyming later on!