A title, A dream; a click, a new heaven to discover...

Your job is great. As ...about this style of writing, this way to bring the events where you want in the story...it is becoming dangerous for your females readers' heart.

...I don't find anything more to say here for I haven't learnt to write down such strong feeling yet...

Then...bye.

Sylvara

phew!

for a second there I was afraid that the "I" in the story was a girl, and I was a bit worried there. Hey! Yay! You go to MSU! hehe, I live in MI, MSU is my first pick college if I'm staying in the states. I love the way you write, it's just neat and flowing. Though you did switch the story from past to present tense in the middle of it. But it was a very good one-shot, as i'm assuming it is. What else do you write, I wonder?

I like this. it's sweet.