hey, it sounds like a good story, with lots of potential, update soon!

Okay, so I'm confused with Kelly/Ryan thing... so Ryan's a boy, but his mom was weird and named him Keylly? Right? Um... well the story sounds interesting, though. (:

I think that this first chapter is really good! Update as soon as you can. =)

Yay, new story! This sounds like a really good storyline to work off of. I really like the characters. Nice so far. Keep it up!