"You corrected us – enchanted us – stole the innocence like a magician"I love the format of this line. Last two lines work well, too. No real critiques on this one... keep up the great writing.

~The Willow~

Very full of feeling, this poem. I like this. Thanks for commenting on my poem, love. Muchly appreciated.

nice poem. very interest- catching. thanks for your comment.

gorgeous. "my words shadowed by silence" i love it. as a singer, its hard to relate to those who cannot sing, but ive always felt really bad. its a great release. but still, the singer reminds me of a friend of mine. "make me lose my balance, for one moment" it works wonderfully, and i love that comparasin. it really does fit perfectly. ~Silver

Compared to my voice I sound like a toad who has a cold :P ... naah just kidding, some voices when heard can create particular emotions. I know this thorugh the voices of Clannad, Mary Black and Dagda ... they are so beautiful and so inspiring ...

good luck

keltica, the celtic fire from within

lol, nice! i know the feeling. which i could sing. I'll just have to put up with being a really bad guitarist. :) very well done.