Hey this is cool! You would get alot more reviews thought if you were on mediaminer . org though. Kitsunes really intrest me and I was wondering if you could email me (my email is on my bio), because I don't know alot about them. My favorite characters are Youko and Shippou. Umm I'm rambling again, but I would really like to talk to you. L8terz.

I like it, I think maybe the first dream needs a bit more discription but other than that I think it will make an excelent story when you get finished.

If you could please rate one of my storys I would be very Grateful. Rain Rose

I like the short intro to this, very thoughtful and perhaps a little introspective...

Slight spelling errors ...hear instead of hereThrough instead of Threwform instead of fromSeams instead of SeemsShale instead of shall

Interesting. You might want to reedit some of the conversation as it feels rather limp and lifeless at times.

Your character should be a little more shocked at the change I think. Also, I'm not sure that people changing form would be taken so well by people, family or not.

Otherwise, interesting.

Sam.