 merrymowmow 2006-12-09 . chapter 35I was wondering when you're going to update. |
 Wolfie Star26 2005-08-31 . chapter 34Ok, I'll admit it, this was far better then what I said in my last review for this story. After a long break of being away from your good stories I came back and read it all of it. I had a feeling that you were going to bring Justin's step father back into the mix but I didn't know how, and now I know. But I'm glad seka axed him. Eden and Tara are perfect siblings. Shannon is still kinda in my sense possessive. But then again who wouldn't be with Rio/Tara.
I'm glad you brought Seka back and I amazed that she was a interpol agent, but it was a perfect idea. I still love Sven and Justin, I don't think anyone can hate them. I still can't get over the 'mom' and 'dad' part. But Sven does act like a mother sometimes.
So, I can't tell, but since this hasn't been updated since june, I'm assuming you either have finished the story or it's writersblock. neways, just keep up the great work and update soon.
~Silver |
 princess max 2005-06-13 . chapter 34Antoher kid? Wow, Sven and Justin have been busy:) Glad Tara/Rio's safe and that you've finally updated this story! |
 emerald raven 2005-06-13 . chapter 34ding dong the psychos dead! ha! die you evil bastard! *kicks adam* mwuhuhahahaha! ok i'll calm donw! but m'hyper! you updated Eden (obviously)finally! i officially love you! and seka's back! yay! is she staying for good? now that she's part of the family an all...this was brilliant - really cheered me up to hear from tara n the gang ((even if it wasn't the happiest chapter)) pwease update again soon!
luv n huggles
Emerald RavenX x X |
 princess max 2005-04-13 . chapter 33WHAT? What's going to happen to Eden and Tara?? They're not going to die, are they? Oh thank goodness for Alina!
Now Samuel, *he* needs to die! |
 emerald raven 2005-04-12 . chapter 33adam's back?! and he's samueal?! omg i did not see that one coming - but will he remain dead this time? cause it'd be really creepy if he survived that as well... aw poor eden - cold bastard...if he wasn't already dead i'd kill him...is tara gonna tell justin? ok i'll stop talking now - but you gotta update this again - you know i obsess over it...lol
luv n huggles
Emerald RavenX x X |
 Rubedo Jr. 2005-04-11 . chapter 33*gapes* At first, I was kinda like 'whoa', and then it turned to "WHAT THE!?" AND THEN IT BECAME HOLY PIG-MAKING COWS ON ETERNAL DOOM IT'S ADAM AND NOW HE'S DEAD AND IS THAT SEKA AND WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW *breathes* Okay...
...I don't know HOW many rules of grammar I broke just then, but this chapter is...CONTROVERSIAL.
I like it. ^_^ |
 emerald raven 2005-03-06 . chapter 32oh an update! yay! i gotta say I was hoping for some bloodshed as well...but the result was just as good in my book - are we gonna see what happens to marina and alina? cause I think i'm sensing something between marina and shane...or is that my imagination...lol - anyway can't wait for another update ^_^
luv n huggles
Emerald RavenX x X |
 Rubedo Jr. 2005-02-22 . chapter 32I'm very dissapointed in myself...I haven't reviewed in AGES! between working part-time and AP Courses, I'm busier than I used to be. I do apologize for my tardiness. As always, your story inspires me to get started on a story of my own... |
 princess max 2005-02-18 . chapter 32I'm so glad Alina and Marina didn't fight with Tara! Oh, so many hugs and kisses being sent your way! I love that Rio isn't so rage-focused that she feels the need to 'score points' because she can. It says a lot for her that she can have people hurt her and still be moral enough to forgive them.
And I certainly hope that isn't Samuel at the end. That is *not* who I want around Eden. |
 emerald raven 2005-02-17 . chapter 31snake charmer! i loved that line! oh is serpentina ever gonna get it! *mad applause* go rio! only part one of the fight! no we must have the last part! pwease pwease update soon! i wanna see just how badly serpentina looses!
luv n huggles
Emerald RavenX x X |
 princess max 2005-02-16 . chapter 31You are an evil, evil woman. I really hope Marina will pop in and rescue Serpentina and stop her from fighting. I'm also a bit scared for Tara. I know she's a great fighter, but I'm worried she's been out of the ring for too long. |
 emerald raven 2005-02-04 . chapter 30aw poor tara! at least one of those two sisters is being sensible, will serpentina listen though? i'm glad to see tara openin up a bit more though...i cant wait for more =P
luv n huggles
Emerald RavenX x X |
 Rubedo Jr. 2005-02-02 . chapter 30wow...I had to read that twice to see that I had read it correctly; Rio, er uh...Tara, or..let's just call her Tario. >_< back to my main point...Tara finally telling Jeff about the rape, and him not running down the first person he saw! good job portraying the emotions there. keep it up! |
 princess max 2005-02-01 . chapter 30That's so sad. Poor Tara.
On another note, I'm glad Marina stood up to Alina, but I seriously hope Alina doesn't do anything stupid. Maybe Shane could start liking her or something?! |