"...scared to deathof living alonewithout the touchand inspiration of lovethat keeps me afloaton this raging river!"

Wow, that line really got me. Perfect metaphor. Love (and life) is just like that. I really like your work, you can really tune into it because of your words and the images they create.

Thank you for the poem, its very you wrote this I think you would enjoy a book called Of Nightingales That Weep. By Katherine Paterson. I'd think you enjoy it if your a book reader, a women is betrayed by someone she loves. It's like your poem

I really love this poem. It's really thoughtful and just generally bitterly beautiful. congratulations, it's x

Not quite sure I absorbed everything from this that was intended, but I still love it. Quite a few lines in there that caught my eye and impressed me. Good piece. _

Nice. great job.

Woah! Such a powerful poem! I really enjoyed reading it, and could find no fault it was a perfect poem, very descriptive and very imaginative. It's excellent.

this was all beautiful!

I love it. The storyline is great. The poem tells so much in just a few lines. good for you. yay!

very good keep up the good work

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Your nothing like him...you'rehow your in love with me...you'rescared with his name...scarredyour nothing like the one... you're

very powerful poem... nice repition... i loved hte ending... amazing job...one of your best

I really really liked the last 7 lines, my favorite.

that was truly beautiful. it is wonderfully worded. great job!