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| Brenden James 2005-01-03 ch 1,  | abuseHA HA HA HA now you know how everybody else feels but i do agree with you about your profile * god he he that is saying something what has he done for me |
| Made in U.S.A. 2004-12-25 ch 1, | abuseAgain you did a great job on this and I just love your style its always so true and very well written. You are definatly one of the top writers on fictionpress if not the best. Keep writing. |
| Kantessa 2004-12-24 ch 1, | abuseI love your style, it's hauntingly bittersweet, and it almost makes me want to cry. |
| Maggy May Clark 2004-12-19 ch 1, | abuseI have to say that Iliked this one. |
| AntiPleasure 2004-12-19 ch 1, | abuseWell hello Mr. attention seeker, what an interesting contribution... a love poem. I think you have what they call "good story skills with description to back it up" but something is kind of missing. I do like this line though "That rot in the tombs and encasements to their mortality." Good piece but you know it's not really you. I hope you don't turn into a big soft mushy-pushy and lose your ability to write your oh-so-philosophical views lol I'm kidding. Keep at it. Don't let this poem be your last love poem. Jenna xoxo |
| Gaki Toki 2004-12-19 ch 1, | abuse...Holy Horse **...that was amazing, of course you are one of my favorite authors, I shouldn't expect anything less should I? I'm so dumb...*Hit's own head* better get back to Ren's theories...I can't get enough of them...lol |
| lola-in-slacks 2004-12-19 ch 1, | abuseAh what a great poem. I think it's a bit Shakespearean somehow but I've got no evidence to back that up. Maybe it's all the dirty Shakespeare air I've been breathing. And you manage to combine love with modern love with scepticism with SEX AND DEATH *enormous thumbs up that cannot be expressed through any other media* |
| NeuroticGothicLolitaDeathDo... 2004-12-18 ch 1, | abuseHi, I'm writing to let you know I haven't been uploading any of my work because someone has been plagerizing it. Until everything is cleared up, I'm keeping off of fictionpress. However, if you have a livejournal you can add me (xlolita_complex) my work will be on there, if you're interested. Thanks so much for taking your time to review my work ^^Dolly |
| Cthulhu 2004-12-17 ch 1, | abuse"And from heart in heart, We dissemble hands and trace our lines apart, Pulled and deconstructed art, Eros buried after dark." These were the best lines from a great poem. I love the rhymes and rhythym within your poetry and this was no exception. Love it!! |
| logical-unreason 2004-12-17 ch 1, | abuseI just reviewed myself. |