wow! this is great! i love the evil faeries hehehe, keep on writing this is brilliant!

Yay! I so love this chapter! This totally rox! The faeries are so cute and lovely... Not! Poor Fiendar, I wonder what's going to happen next (put next chapter up ASAP, must read, I need the laugh at this:P)Update soon

good chapter

Hahaha! Wicked chapter! Poof Firendar scared of crossing the bridge!! Haha!! *dodges throwing knives* hhm... yes... too much coffee, can't you tell. Poor Emalia. This chapter was cool, very good on their fears Sian, keep it up! Update soon!

Cool chapter. Is the person who escapedx who appears later by any chance? This is wicked, the Master is kinda wierd and Emalia is a little whiney but she still rox!! Keep it up! Update soon!!

Mean! I liked this chapter the way it was before *grins* This is good, I liked it. Emalia is cool. Heehee seeing gems... cool. Update soon or I kill you!! *Attacks Sian with tiger plushies!*

Heehee, action. I like it. This is wicked, as usual. Daria's are wicked. I so like your introduction to the game Saren Source, it builds suspense as we have no idea what the hell it is

Nice chapter, I like it. Its a little short though. lol

If I run away and hide, will you not kill me? My internetty must have messed up on you coz none of my reviews are here.

This chapter is good, it is a wicked way to start your story. I don't like Kanna and Suro much, though their names are cool!

Wicked story, I really like it. The Saren Source is a wicked game! Yopu have great ideas for this story! No giving up on it you horrible person. Who cares how many people review? Give up and I'll hide the dynamite and matches for the school *manic laughter* ok... no more coffe for WomynRule!

I love this story -- Especially the Daria! -pets Daria as she is almost murdered- And now, to finish the story! ^.~

Very good story, I love it, Keep up the good work! You'd better keep at it coz I know where you live! Mwhahahahaha!

i really like your story, but just try to make Firendar not always be so fierce. Make her have some sensative side. You have to give her a weakness. It would make the story more interesting. Well anyways keep writing :)

B~bye

~*Frost

that was probably your best chapter. There were a few errors, but i think you wrote this one really well.

Keep Writing :)

B~bye

~*Frost

Good chappie. I just think that it was too short. You could've added a lot more in it. Just becuase you feel that you should update doens't mean that you should just write a really short chapter.

B~bye

Wolf*Frost