You know, I really sympathize with this. I really like the ending.

"I'm not a lost cause But please give up" are beautiful lines! Exactly how I feel when my parents are on my case.

Powerful message. I've felt this way a lot before. Some parents think they can control everything we do. I like this poem a lot! Keep on writing!

wow! a little angry and mean but i can fully understand where you're coming from b/c i can totally relate. thanks for sharing and keep writing!

p.s. when you get time please check out some of my work. thnx in advance!

I’m not a lost cause

But please, give up!

Ha! I love that, great write.

shit, does that mean something to me. never stop writing. ever. or i'll knee-cap you.

Awesome poem! Keep writing.