   love you to death 2007-05-30 . chapter 1I like the last line. It stands out the most. |
 Jet Magbanua 2005-10-02 . chapter 1honest, poignant. |
 dancingintherain 2005-02-16 . chapter 1aww..it's so sad, yet sweet in a way... |
 Deathonland 2005-02-14 . chapter 1I like it.. not as morbid as it could be, but it does justice fine enough. |
 Biene 2005-02-13 . chapter 1 beautiful..touching...and simple. |
 yoUNgIN-mIstReSS 2004-12-28 . chapter 1cute, short and straight to the poitn...love it! :) |
 Shinji Boi69 2004-12-22 . chapter 1I love short poetry. If it's not a haiku, and it's short, then I love it. great job here. Keep up the great work.~shinji |
 Just Another Face 2004-12-22 . chapter 1I liked it. It was short, but emotional. I've felt like this before...Great job, and thanks for the review!
Much Love,~Lyndz~ |
 Keith Andrew 2004-12-21 . chapter 1Hey this is really sad, well done expressing the emotion. Nice work-keith Andrew |
 imaginate 2004-12-20 . chapter 1Wow, I've been there! Short and to the point but powerful. Nice work.
PS. thanks for your review! |
 M. R. Smale 2004-12-20 . chapter 1This is a very powerful and well written poem, and says all it has to wonderfully in just a few lines. Keep up the great work! |
 erasedcrap 2004-12-19 . chapter 1Short and sweet. Good job of placing the blame on yourself while still letting them down. Very nice. |
 this is my love for you 2004-12-19 . chapter 1Powrful. You conveyed alot with just those words. |
 no-one now 2004-12-19 . chapter 1This gets the message across without be rambly (i wish i could do that!). Well done! |
 Forsaken Writer 2004-12-18 . chapter 1Oo. Angsty. Well, cool poem.
-Forsaken |
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