this is really cool, are you going to write more?

I like it. I hope you rite mor. That is if it is not a one shot.

AW! i loved that story! so sweet! it rocked!

awesome...love your story!

omg...wow, that was good. lol I totally wasn't expecting shelly to accept it like that. you should so continue!!

cool story!

Sleek. I love this fic. ^_^

I know this was a one shot but it would be very interesting if you continued it. I'd like to see more of these characters. Nice fic can't wait for more of BS&M. Till next time! Miko

absolutely love the beginning. if you wanted to make it more interesting, you make the real world atheme a male...it could add a whole new twist to the story...but seriously, love the detail and description at the beginning.

Oh god, this was awesome. It felt like it was actually a real event, and the descriptiveness was great. Keep writing, I like your style!

-Marth