 Anybody's Angel 2006-03-08 . chapter 1this is really cool, are you going to write more? |
 fireinu 2005-08-14 . chapter 1I like it. I hope you rite mor. That is if it is not a one shot. |
 Indubidably 2005-04-22 . chapter 1AW! i loved that story! so sweet! it rocked! |
 ShortStuff1 2005-02-26 . chapter 1awesome...love your story! |
 Mitaku-Oyasin 2005-02-09 . chapter 1omg...wow, that was good. lol I totally wasn't expecting shelly to accept it like that. you should so continue!! |
 beatz 2004-12-23 . chapter 1 cool story! |
 Reticia 2004-12-23 . chapter 1 Sleek. I love this fic. ^_^ |
 Miko633 2004-12-18 . chapter 1I know this was a one shot but it would be very interesting if you continued it. I'd like to see more of these characters. Nice fic can't wait for more of BS&M. Till next time! Miko |
 ZaphodChick 2004-12-17 . chapter 1absolutely love the beginning. if you wanted to make it more interesting, you make the real world atheme a male...it could add a whole new twist to the story...but seriously, love the detail and description at the beginning. |
 Marth Azumi 2004-12-17 . chapter 1Oh god, this was awesome. It felt like it was actually a real event, and the descriptiveness was great. Keep writing, I like your style!
-Marth |