Reviews for The End of the World

Nersesian 2005-02-16 ch 1,	abusei dont like the word "shrivel" i dont know what you could use instead, but im just not jumping out of my seat for "shrivel". maybe if something like "to lie, motionless, and alone, in the dark" but its not my poem
hiding behind amber eyes 2005-01-02 ch 1,	abusei like this. honesty is the best policy! lol awesome job buddy!
Just Another Face 2004-12-24 ch 1,	abuseOoh. Haunting. I liked it alot, I don't know if you remember me, but you reviewed something of mine a while back, McDonalds, I think it was. Either way, I liked it alot.Nice discriptions! ~Lyndz~
simpleplan13 2004-12-17 ch 1,	abusei remember hte longer version... lol.. somewhat.. lol.. anyhow i liek this one a lot.. interesting concept and well done.. thanks for your reviews!
Sarah-Brighteyes 2004-12-17 ch 1,	abuseInteresting. I love how you start the poem. Its short, yet a great thinking peice. Good.