Very real-world. I like that. It was written well, nice choice of words. Keep writting!

wow i like this story im gonna keep my eye on it. thanks for your reviews, btw which chapter did u point out the mistake in, seeing as both me and neofilly write out different chaps. i (greMlin wrote chapter 2) neofilly the rest.

Neat work with this though, it's so true. I'm not a popular, probally like the girl they're ** about.

hey, real nice story. A classic (though not overused) plot. It could have been written with more emotion and it seems a little rushed but it was a nice read. I loved the last line. I think with a little tweaks here and there it could be an exellent story. keep writing (and reviewing... heh...) :)