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| They Got It Wrong 2006-07-26 ch 2,  | abuseHi there, I have to review just to say, um well... I hardly believe a 3 year old can be described as a 'bundle'! The way you are writing it makes it sound like a baby. Were you getting the idea from Harry Potter perchance? :)Also, when Gilwen enters, it should either say; 'a young man' or 'a youth' not just 'a young...'Anyways, this is a really good idea and if you don't start updating I might have to steal it off you :D (meaning, I'll write it for you if you told me whats supposed to be happening!) luv ya, but won't be seeing you all that soon unfortunately, Verity x |
| Steph.G 2006-02-15 ch 2, anon. | abuseyeh it's me but if I sign in it wont let me review anymore! lalala. Princess Luna! mad. And 'the beginning of a new beginning'... que? lol. I like your description of the lickle goily by the way. V.sweet. Yeh I'm bored. You couldn't tell could you? Bla bla blee blee. coo coo. coo coo. pth.pfw.pro. ok.. bye! |
| Brighde 2006-02-10 ch 1, | abuseAw, this has so much potential. I saw aww because I realize it's been like, a year without anything more but- the idea behind this is such a good one and you know what, a year or not, I'd really love to read more ^_^ Hah, I know they're only three but I can totally see a little romance between the two kids when they're older ;) Ooh and she's gonna have to be trained to fight when's she's grows up- how exciting ^_^ Well, I hope there'll be an update eventually, and great writing, this chapter definitely catches the reader :) -B. Blum |
| Grez 2006-02-07 ch 2, | abuseyeh brothers... aren't they just the worst? |
| Grez 2006-02-07 ch 1, | abuseAw the little people are cute! and I like the description at the beginning - good use of personification! : ) p.s. you said you had no reviews for this one so here you are! : ) |