I read all 13 chapters and enjoyed them. There were some problems with word placment and spelling all that crap. Good Job!

Oh, YAY they got away! This is a good story...can't wait to see what happens next! : )

You must continue this story it is simply genouis! I dont Know if i spelled that right. very good story im anxouis to see what happens next!

It was great!

very nice. please continue. i am thoroughly enjoying this story. ^_^

You stink sap with ending the story right there. Lovers? what?!?! when did that happen? Anyways, Is Silver going to be okay?

I absolutely love this story: It is very creative, and the chapters are not all agonizingly long. One bit of advise though: check your spelling when you have time, or get someone else to do. This is not criticism. Like I said, I love this story.

::smiles evily:: either I totally missed the point or I'm right, but I thought it was hilarious, because at first I thought Leil was mean, then I laughed at the end, maybe it wasn't funny oh well I thought it was. My friends also think I'm the biggest prude in existence, well except that really horny bi guy in my band, who writes stories and makes me read them, and write responces. Oh well. Anyways, sorry about rambling, but erm, I think I updated last on the twelvth or something.

Well then. How did you e-mail me about this story and I have never read it?hrm...*thinks* WELL I LOVE THE STORY! Post more

I'm situated on earth in the milky way galaxy, ever hear of it? Just kidding. I'm just from boring US, Massachusettes(can't spell that for the life of me) to be exact. No, I didn't expect the chase to be so short, but they got away for now. That's what counts.

Hey! Please update soon! This story is turning out great!

lol. Your welcome and thank you for the gratitude. I must say again, you're a killer writer. Awesome work! Please update again soon!

Evil little thing that you are, you better get them safe, though I have to say the evil side of me wants to see what would happen if Silver was caught. Also perhaps I over reacted, it's a C...in honors English (blushes), still compared to everyone else I know, my writings horrible. I can't wait for more (since tomorrow will be the fifth snow day in a row).

It's really good. Please update soon!!

Hehe. I'm just as new at this. Yes I like it, but Silver is gone again and that makes me sad. If I wasn't failing English, I probably would have a few suggestions, so continue writing.