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Ethereal Oceans 2005-01-09 ch 8,	abuseYAY! An update WITH the letter. I was so happy! Kim was pregnant? Ohie. A baby. If I found out I was pregnant I could never kill my own baby. No matter what. Kim was kinda cruel. I think Deanna has finally forgiven Kim for killing herself. I'm still not sure whats going to happen but I cant wait to find out. Update soon!
The Restock Bandits 2005-01-06 ch 8,	abuseThank you so much for the review, it meant the world to us (I write Fermata with my friend). And you have to know, I was dying to find out what that letter said.
The Restock Bandits 2005-01-04 ch 7,	abusewOOt. Another awesome fiction. I like this one even better.
Ethereal Oceans 2005-01-02 ch 7,	abuseOMG! Whats the damn note say? lol. This is driving me completely insane. I have checked this story every day for updates only to find out that you still havent put up the note. Why?!?!? Okay, I'm calm. This chapter was as good as the rest. I dont really think Preston likes Deanna though. I just think he's still in major grief over Kim and in some sense he thinks Deanna is Kim. I wish you would show the note! lol. Still awesome. Keep writing!
norway-dreamer06 2004-12-31 ch 7,	abuseThat's a good story, although you should learn to spell. It's really sad.Keep up the good work. Lou-Chan
Ethereal Oceans 2004-12-27 ch 6,	abuseAH! I have to figure out what that note says. Why do you keep stalling? Dont you realize that this is some form of sick torture? Lol. Okay, I'm calm. Poor Deanna. I would hate to have people feeling all sympathetic towards me all the time. She handles it pretty well. I would've knocked Beth's head off if she had said anything about taking pictures of my dead sister and putting them in a yearbook. Anywayz, love this chapter. I too think that Deanna is pretending. Preston is so sad. Ohie. I cant wait to see what the note says. Update soon!
CW-nerd-12 2004-12-23 ch 2,	abuseAw. I like this! It seriously sucks you didn't finish "I'm no Jesus," though! You can't just give up like that! You abandon your first draft and go back and re-write the whole thing, you don't just ABANDON everything! cardinal rule of long-term prose writing: finish it, damnit! hahaha. Anyway, if you aren't going to finish "INJ" then you can at least review my stories, "ELevator Music" (shich is kind of like this one, 1 of the main characters has to face the death of her older brther while everyone around her is moving on), "Standing in the Middle of Winter" (homeless teens, but not quite like Clarissa, or I forget her name... (damn)). or have you read, "Manny Michaels's Littel Sister?" that's my materpiece, something I've actually finished!
Ethereal Oceans 2004-12-22 ch 5,	abuseOMG! I cant believe she left him a note. A cliffhanger? I hate you. How dare you! lol. Gawd, u HAVE to update soon. HAVE to. This was another awesome chapter. I cant wait to see what the note says.
girl-23 2004-12-22 ch 2,	abuseWow, this story is really amazing already. I'm not surprised though, since I enjoy all of your stories. I'll be reading the next chapters now... ~Laura~
Beautifula 2004-12-21 ch 4,	abuseYou write so well! I like this story a lot! Even though it is sad... update soon!
Ethereal Oceans 2004-12-21 ch 4,	abuseYay! Thank you so much for updating. Im becoming addicted to this story. Poor Preston. Poor Deanna. I dunno how I'd act if my sister died. Me and her really dont ever talk unless its to fight about something. Then we'll go on for hours insulting each other. lol. But great chapter. They keep getting better and better. Update soon!
Ethereal Oceans 2004-12-20 ch 3,	abuseOhie... poor Preston. This story keeps getting better with each chapter. I cant even imagine how it would feel to lose someone I loved. Especially my boyfriend. It would kill me. He must feel like dying. Ohie, this is so sad. Update soon
Ethereal Oceans 2004-12-18 ch 2,	abuseThis is a pretty awesome story. You captured the emotions perfectly and was able to make it realistic. Not many ppl can do that. Update soon.
DOORphrame 2004-12-18 ch 2,	abuseThis is really nice. I really like how you incorporated so well all the different feelings people feel when someone they love commits suicide. Keep it up!

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